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Alone by ~zzz99:iconzzz99:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


The Room,
A dark,
Scary place,
No sight,
No light,
And you're all alone.

Reach out,
No one,
There at all,
Suddenly you fall,
"Help me!" you call,
But you are alone.

Falling down,
Into the pit,
Where only you fit,
Suddenly you are hit,
As it all was 'rit,
But weren't you alone?

Soon you will die,
In this moment you cry,
Wishing you could fly,
You even try,
But you let out a sigh,
Because all of it was for nigh.

And you're all alone,
You are alone,
But weren't you alone?
Alone in the pit,
Alone in the Room,
Alone in pain,
Always alone,
Alone.
©2008-2009 ~zzz99
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Author's Comments

oh i hate being so lonely ><

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~Emoraven613 May 23, 2008, 7:58:46 PM
i feel you buddy! >< :glomp:

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Help me to help the unloved...
+Medic
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~a-freakin-rpg-gamer May 24, 2008, 9:22:17 AM
You're really into the "AAAA" thing aren't you? Despite its cause, I'm glad your getting back into poetry :)

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"Happiness, Wrath, Anxiety, Fright,
Sorrow, Remorse, Brash, Delight
When mixed together cause quite the commotion,
But you should never hide from your =RawEm0tion"
:iconzzz99:
~zzz99 May 24, 2008, 2:23:51 PM
:glomp: thank you

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Don't you know, in the end, we'll be tragically torn apart?
:iconzzz99:
~zzz99 May 24, 2008, 2:26:54 PM
well actually if you noticed it grew into an AAAA
and yes, i love doing it :lol:

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Don't you know, in the end, we'll be tragically torn apart?
:iconunwanted-princess:
~unwanted-princess May 25, 2008, 11:25:12 AM
i love how this changed into being an AAAA poem with the second stanza.
^_^

--
The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog.
Th qu k ow fox ju s ov th azy og.
:iconzzz99:
~zzz99 May 26, 2008, 9:29:05 AM
thank you :D

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Don't you know, in the end, we'll be tragically torn apart?
:iconunwanted-princess:
~unwanted-princess May 26, 2008, 11:06:19 AM
you're welcome.

--
The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog.
Th qu k ow fox ju s ov th azy og.
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